Thursday, May 14, 2009

ERP : Personal Narrative

2.b) Recall a time your parent brought you to a place that holds a lot of memories.Describe how it felt then and its impact on you now
Everytime I see my huge,green army jacket, I always remember Melbourne, the only part of Australia that I have visited.I had just finished my third year of junior high school and the long school holiday was coming.We were going to Melbourne for holiday and my parents had planned this trip long before this.At that time, Melbourne was in a winter season and the weather was much colder than Bandung, my hometown .So, one of our preparation for this trip was to buy winter cloths and I chose to buy a huge, green army jacket.
After we have finished packing our stuffs, we went to Soekarno-Hatta International Airport at Jakarta.I was very excited when our plane Have taken off from the airport.It took about five hours to reach Melbourne.I felt tired after the long flight, sitting for too long made my legs felt numb and the my head felt a bit dizzy.However, the beauty of Melbourne removed all those pains from me in an instant.The airport was huge and luxurious.It was my first time to see this kind of airport.The area was huge, the floor was covered by a soft carpet and all of the signs were put in place tidily.
We proceed to the baggage claim and put our luggage in the X – Ray.Suddenly, the security person held us and asked us to open our luggage.I was shocked, we have travelled to a few different countries before and not even once we were asked to open our luggage.He checked our luggage thoroughly and confiscated a pack of chocolate.We were allowed to go and I felt a slight relief that it was just a pack of chocolate.
We took a taxy and went to our hotel.As I was tired from the flight,I went to deep slumber quickly.The next day, we began our exploration of Melbourne. Melbourne was very beautiful. It is a mixture of modern city with an untouched, antique buildings from the past.One of this buildings was The Cathedral.I felt like I was in a scene of “Da Vinci Code’ film, when I was in this grandiose church.One thing that was new for me from Melbourne was its people.Australia consists of mostly “westerner” and this was very different with my country, which consists of mostly Malay and Chinese.
Sadly, one week was clearly not enough to visit all corners of Melbourne.All about Melbourne was adorable.The perfect English of its people which I found it quite difficult to understand sometimes, the heart-soothing green parks and the attractive beauty of blonde haired women.It was an amazing experience to be in Melbourne and I will not think twice if I was offered to go there again.

Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Streking Introduction

Can you imagine being naked in the public?Most people will not dare to do it but some university students do it on their own will.They do a mass nude run in front of the whole university students.What can be so fun of running naked?

Sunday, April 5, 2009

Commentary : Reading on Streaking

Streaking is a mass nude run where people take off their clothes and run.Nowadays, streaking becomes more and more popular among the university student, especially the graduates.There are many possible reasons for them to streak but usually it is for fame.Streaking will make one whole batch know you.However, many people do not like the idea of streaking, they consider it as an act of rebellion and many people find it annoying. I personally agree with the idea of streaking.
Streaking is not just a mass nude run but it has a deep meaning behind it.Streaking is an act of celebration.It is a symbol of freedom for the graduates after they finally finished their education days and moved on to the next step of their life.Streaking can give the people doing it a sense of freedom, happiness, and make them feel energetic.In some way, it could be a cheerful and pleasant event.
However, streaking also has its own bad effects.For example, doing a mass nude run in late night while shouting will surely annoy other people who are trying to sleep.The most serious concern is the idea of running while naked because many people will not like to see other people "private" body parts.Running while naked is considered very vulgar and impolite.Although some particular people might enjoy seeing it but the majority of people will be concerned by this.
In conclusion, streaking indeed has negative values but it is still tolerable if it is done in right way.Many students would like to try streaking and it should not be entirely banned but maybe monitored so the event can last peacefully but the fun keep goes on.

Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Commentary : Reading for Streaking

Streaking is a mass nude run where people take off their clothes and run.Nowadays, streaking becomes more and more popular among the university student, especially the graduates.There are many possible reasons for them to streak but usually it is for fame.Streaking will make one whole batch know you.However, many people do not like the idea of streaking, they consider it as an act of rebellion and many people find it annoying.

Sunday, March 29, 2009

Exposition

A type of essay writting that explains certain details from a topic completely